User's Comments:

algeya, 12 Dec 2005 02:55 pm

remember that guy he was in chapter 1 see ya next friday

Talking_Ketchup, 12 Dec 2005 03:21 pm

I really like the stroy of this comic and the art is awsome tho I have 1 thing to comment on

The Dialogue is very thin Im just guessing english is your second language... but anyways the dialogue is kinda poor and dull and hard to read with no Comma's and souch, so its hard to keep along with the writing.

so for me it was nearly like a picture show just a lil notice for ya there.

PS: perhaps you should consider having someone who have english as theyre first language write the dialogue.

Talking_Ketchup, 13 Dec 2005 01:50 am

oh and another thing id suggest was if you have photoshop mess around with the lvls so the lineart gets darker, couse right now its kinda gray

algeya, 13 Dec 2005 11:35 am

the only policy that i have with this strip is not to use the computer, except for the words
its just old pen & ink work

for computer works check Pilli adventures my other webcomic

but thanks anyway

Talking_Ketchup, 13 Dec 2005 02:50 pm

I know and its decent inkwork Im just saying it could do with some darkening by levels but okay :) decent comic anyways mate.

Oyer, 20 Dec 2005 12:39 pm

ROLF. Those little things look crazily anoying.
I'm not sure what "Is there isn't" means though. :S

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