this is the end of chapter 2 ,next the battle starts

its a shame that i can do pages faster , by the way Iam going to upload Pilli Adventures early in monday instead of tuesday

User's Comments:

Phantom_Penguin, 14 Feb 2006 08:40 pm

i just started reading this. I like it.

Masterweaver, 09 May 2007 07:08 pm

A: REVAMP THE GRAMMER! Misspellings and weird sentences everywhere. I know you are spanish, but the basic equation to english is quite simple.
B: Tell us more about this game bot conspiricy. Are the corporate leaders onto this? Is it a retreat for ncient powers? Does the military condone this action?
C: Can the readers create characters?

Otherwise, tis the greatest thing scince Mekar Norch!

Masterweaver, 24 Aug 2007 03:09 pm

Are you updating?!?!

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