A: REVAMP THE GRAMMER! Misspellings and weird sentences everywhere. I know you are spanish, but the basic equation to english is quite simple.
B: Tell us more about this game bot conspiricy. Are the corporate leaders onto this? Is it a retreat for ncient powers? Does the military condone this action?
C: Can the readers create characters?
Otherwise, tis the greatest thing scince Mekar Norch!